Re:What makes writing more readable?
by d0gbread on Wednesday February 23, 2022 @11:27AM
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The way they rephrased also simply omitted detail, which doesn't seem like a fair comparison. I'd much rather see an example where no detail is lost but would still have wider comprehension. Literally dumbing it down by stripping detail doesn't seem like a clear best practice.
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Re:What makes writing more readable?
by macintux on Wednesday February 23, 2022 @11:49AM
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It’s impossible to express the same content using simpler words without making the text much longer, which defeats the purpose of making it easier to read.
The more precise a term is, the more it expresses without added verbiage, but it’s also less likely to be widely understood.
This rather mixes simpler/more difficult and shorter/longer as equivalent - even interchangeable - aspects of writing. But these are not transitive: shorter is not simpler, nor is simpler (i.e., more understandable) necessarily shorter; similarly, a longer piece isn't more difficult simply by its length.
Writing is hard; writing clearly - more understandably - is harder yet. Writing precisely, which would link some concepts of length/wordiness directly with understandability and clarity, is the hardest of all.
"If I Had More Time, I Would Have Written a Shorter Letter" - Blaise Pascal