Re:What makes writing more readable?
by micromacrofoot on Wednesday February 23, 2022 @11:09AM
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Premature is a medical term that's a little hard with someone with an intellectual disability to parse unless they're already familiar.
If you don't have that knowledge retained it's a much larger leap to figure out what "premature" means. you have to understand the prefix (pre = before) and know what "mature" means in this context (not old, but rather "not ready").
This complicates the fact that premature birth also requires a lot of prior understanding (why can a baby be born too early? why is that a problem?)
Perhaps the author could have elaborated a little with plain language... "Born too soon" might be clearer.
If you don't have that knowledge retained it's a much larger leap to figure out what "premature" means. you have to understand the prefix (pre = before) and know what "mature" means in this context (not old, but rather "not ready").
This complicates the fact that premature birth also requires a lot of prior understanding (why can a baby be born too early? why is that a problem?)
Perhaps the author could have elaborated a little with plain language... "Born too soon" might be clearer.