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Re:The tragic rape of Charles Bukowski’s ghost by Black Spar... by praptak on Friday January 21, 2022 @09:23AM (#30023856)
Shorter phrases, shorter words and imperative sentences feel more powerful.
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Re:The tragic rape of Charles Bukowski’s ghost by Black Spar... by dahak27 on Friday January 21, 2022 @09:45AM (#30024145)
Good point yeah, I think the switch from indefinite to definite article also makes it feel less dissociated/bleak too somehow
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