Re:No limit to maximal lifespan in humans: how to beat a 122...
by trentgreene on Thursday December 16, 2021 @05:08AM
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The double contrast is a huge smell for writing. Consider the general form:
Proposition A
However, Proposition B
In Contrast (or any other contradictory linking phrase), Proposition C
Have you considered it? Now answer two questions:
- Do you think Proposition C is in contrast to A or B? or neither?
- Have you ever seen this general form in _good_ writing?
Proposition A
However, Proposition B
In Contrast (or any other contradictory linking phrase), Proposition C
Have you considered it? Now answer two questions: - Do you think Proposition C is in contrast to A or B? or neither? - Have you ever seen this general form in _good_ writing?