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yeah, that paragraph was probably the best one.
all in all i find this text really painful to read.
main issues:
- a lot of sentences feel superfluous, like time-wasting boilerplate
- poor grammar, punctuation and paragraph structure disrupt the reading flow
- there is little logical structure or flow of arguments
- there is far too much repetition
yeah, that paragraph was probably the best one.
all in all i find this text really painful to read.
main issues:
- a lot of sentences feel superfluous, like time-wasting boilerplate
- poor grammar, punctuation and paragraph structure disrupt the reading flow
- there is little logical structure or flow of arguments
- there is far too much repetition