Re:Ask HN: What do you think of my landing page?
by japhyr on Monday August 22, 2011 @12:33AM
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One small thing - the words "wedding vendors" fade into the white part of the background.
Also, you might want to add a little more about what early registrants might get out of it. What geographical areas are you focusing on first? When do you expect to launch? I wouldn't register unless I knew your launch date would be well before my wedding.
Re:Ask HN: What do you think of my landing page?
by imminentdomain on Monday August 22, 2011 @12:47AM
(#2911344)
Yeah, japhyr is right. It may be a personal thing, but I think the left justified Register button is a little off. Maybe right justified, or centered (as I say this, I'm noticing that the add comment button below is left justified as well :)) Nicely done though.
Also, you might want to add a little more about what early registrants might get out of it. What geographical areas are you focusing on first? When do you expect to launch? I wouldn't register unless I knew your launch date would be well before my wedding.
I would probably add a little message on the top of your tagline for the people getting married. Something like:
Worry no more. We are creating a community for top wedding vendors.