Perhaps they can have ellipses (...) that, when moused over, describe in legal detail everything they collect, so those of us who care for the details can read more into it. But I applaud them for trying to keep it readable and short.
The tradeoff is hard to make, but at least for me, it was a right balance.
Here's my privacy policy: http://www.geetasks.com/remote
What do you think?
I was thinking they'd have examples like the above in their Privacy Policy... but I was wrong. If they want to be crystal clear, I think they need to be more specific rather than Analytics, Geo-Location Info, and Personal Info are stored.
"For example" to me seems like just the tip of the iceberg, and the three bullet points seem fairly basic.