Writing tools I learned from The Economist

Re:Writing tools I learned from The Economist by nindalf on Monday April 05, 2021 @02:35PM (#26702783)

I'm surprised GP didn't expect that the letter would be edited.

One of my letters was published. I fully expected that it would be edited and was pleased with the result. You can see both versions here - https://gist.github.com/nindalf/12a533f6ff64d7f146845f289acd.... I thought the edited version conveys the intent well.

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Re:Writing tools I learned from The Economist by munchbunny on Tuesday April 06, 2021 @11:06AM (#26712695)

Thanks for sharing the comparison!

I think I agree, the edited version conveys the meaning and intent well. I assume the links were removed as a matter of form factor/medium.

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Re:Writing tools I learned from The Economist by rusteh1 on Tuesday April 06, 2021 @12:04AM (#26707841)

That's really interesting. Thanks for sharing.

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Re:Writing tools I learned from The Economist by iainmerrick on Tuesday April 06, 2021 @08:36AM (#26711017)

Seconded!

I agree that this is smart editing that preserves the original meaning well. The one decision I question is simplifying your nicely-phrased “Most programmers spend most of their time attaching these disparate blocks together” to just “most programmers spend their time [...]”

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Re:Writing tools I learned from The Economist by specialist on Tuesday April 06, 2021 @10:21AM (#26712081)

If I was King: Default assumption that statements are generalizations, unless explicitly stated otherwise. To preempt pedantry.

Programmers => Programmers in general, with many obvious exceptions, too numerous to list in a brief reply.

All Programmers => All Programmers

PS- Hmmm. Now I wonder if any style guides cover this? Surely some do.

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Re:Writing tools I learned from The Economist by iainmerrick on Tuesday April 06, 2021 @01:10PM (#26714489)

I suppose insisting on both “most”s is a bit pedantic, but I also think it’s nice rhetoric -- reminds me of “you can fool all of the people some of the time, and some of the people all of the time.”

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