I was using the template as-is from the article. Personally I like the brevity of your version much better. If you don't mind, I would love to use it.
Re:Positioning Your Startup Is Vital
by nondeveloper on Monday December 21, 2020 @10:07PM
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Please do. It would be my honor.
I think the first sentence should have shorter, simpler words.
Maybe: “Build an online community in two clicks with DiscoFlip. Easier to configure and monetize than Reddit or Facebook Groups.”