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Re:Positioning Your Startup Is Vital by nondeveloper on Monday December 21, 2020 @07:15PM (#25501399)
I had to read this a few times to understand what your product is, maybe because I wanted to stop reading halfway through the first sentence. Most people scan and if the first scan is too hard they move on.

I think the first sentence should have shorter, simpler words.

Maybe: “Build an online community in two clicks with DiscoFlip. Easier to configure and monetize than Reddit or Facebook Groups.”

Re:Positioning Your Startup Is Vital by riantogo on Monday December 21, 2020 @07:25PM (#25501481)
I was using the template as-is from the article. Personally I like the brevity of your version much better. If you don't mind, I would love to use it.
Re:Positioning Your Startup Is Vital by nondeveloper on Monday December 21, 2020 @10:07PM (#25502412)
Please do. It would be my honor.