Re:Apple, Google and a Deal That Controls the Internet
by pessimizer on Sunday October 25, 2020 @04:23PM
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The NYT constantly embellishes like this, it's a really shitty part of its style. If you want to add information, don't infix it within a description of the Justice Department's argument. At least put the editorial in a different paragraph, if not the editorial section.
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Re:Apple, Google and a Deal That Controls the Internet
by CaptArmchair on Sunday October 25, 2020 @05:18PM
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That sentence is grammatically entirely correct, neither is it misleading. I don't see how it embellishes the core meaning of the phrase.
Is it harder to read with two non-defining clauses? That's something else.