Re:The Stages of Insomnia
by ineedasername on Friday October 16, 2020 @07:54PM
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I like there to be a little acting. I've had books where the delivery was fairly monotone, with no difference in delivery between scene description and a character speaking in anger or surprise etc. It sounds weird, wooden & stiff. I can see how that has the potential to be more distracting when trying to get to sleep though.
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