"Leaving aside grammar/spelling/weird choice"

No, please, don't leave that aside :) The French version is really convincing from my opinion and 5 external opinions. It's a translation problem.

"it's not clear what the thing is here"

As i mention in an another comment, as long as I haven't managed to reach the technical level I want to reach, it's difficult to say more without being incomprehensible.

... But, apparently, it won't be worse than now :D

See this share as a way to warm-up the thing : I will be better next time !