Old TV caused village broadband outages for 18 months

Re:Old TV caused village broadband outages for 18 months by ethanwillis on Tuesday September 22, 2020 @08:25AM (#24553651)

Thanks for that feedback. I'm having to do a lot more writing for my job now so being able to improve my writing with honest feedback is super important.

I agree, I even cringed a little bit when I wrote it. But I didn't want to fully give everything away so it was just a bad edit :) Your suggestion would work a lot better.

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Re:Old TV caused village broadband outages for 18 months by TheAdamAndChe on Tuesday September 22, 2020 @08:45AM (#24553771)

Be sure to write specifically for your target audience. That clickbait would work if your target was the Lowest Common Denominator. It doesn't work so well with a highly technical audience.

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Re:Old TV caused village broadband outages for 18 months by virgulino on Tuesday September 22, 2020 @10:19AM (#24554611)

You had me hook, line and sinker at "cable in my cable modem melted". Great story and great writing, thanks!

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