The legislation is, honestly, difficult enough to parse that linking it with a non-specific comment ("sounds well thought out") just turns into a tar pit. I can't tell if you have specific agreements or disagreements, and the only approach available to discuss is to basically summarize it or link to it again.

On the ACCC response: it implies google made statements they did not, and seems to willfully ignore the reality of supporting the cost of a free service.

Do you have specific things you think this does or doesn't do? In the future it helps to start with those.