He says that to achieve clarity, imagine the subject of each sentence as the character of a scene, and the verb as its action. Make sure you hit both character and action within the first 6-10 words of your sentence.
Begin each sentence with information that the reader is familiar with, and end it with the new information you want to introduce.
That will get you a long way toward creating understanding (and feeling) in the reader.
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He says that to achieve clarity, imagine the subject of each sentence as the character of a scene, and the verb as its action. Make sure you hit both character and action within the first 6-10 words of your sentence.
Begin each sentence with information that the reader is familiar with, and end it with the new information you want to introduce.
That will get you a long way toward creating understanding (and feeling) in the reader.