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Re:How to Write in Plain English by ThePadawan on Tuesday August 25, 2020 @08:15AM (#24270535)
I had a Brazilian roommate who could second this. He (jokingly) complained this was the absolute worst when dealing with split-proposition-verbs:

E. g. "aufgeben" translated part-by-part is "upgive", so "to surrender" or "to give up" in English.

However, in sth. like 3rd position singular, the form would be "er gibt auf" ("he gives up"). But in German, the object goes between "gives" and "up".

Thus, my roommate mentioned a sentence like "Der Präsident gibt sein Versprechen zur Verbesserung der Arbeitslosigkeitsquote auf" (The President gives up his promise about improving unemploymemt rates).

So yeah, parsing German sometimes results a pause while everyone unwinds their stack.

Re:How to Write in Plain English by Joker_vD on Tuesday August 25, 2020 @09:27AM (#24271082)
Well, English too has some interesting ideas where to put prepositions in the sentence, that is, turn them basically into postpositions. For example, "Which basket did you put that exquisite marble figurine in?"

The "in" is logically related to "which basket", so one would expect that the question would actually be *"In which basket...", but nope, that's rustic and colloquial at best. I suspect it's because of the word inversion in questions, since in dependent clauses the order is reasonable: "I put the figurine in this woven concrete basket over there".

Re:How to Write in Plain English by kofejnik on Tuesday August 25, 2020 @11:10AM (#24272138)
> that's rustic and colloquial at best.

nope, the other way around; "don't end sentences in prepositions" is a formal rule iirc. Quoting Grammarly website,

* Which journal was your article published in? (Casual)

* In which journal was your article published? (Formal)

Re:How to Write in Plain English by nicky0 on Tuesday August 25, 2020 @12:02PM (#24272709)
"In which basket did you put that exquisite marble figurine?" is perfectly good English. It sounds better to me that the "which ... in" version. (British English speaker.)
Re:How to Write in Plain English by pmoriarty on Tuesday August 25, 2020 @12:20PM (#24272962)
To my ears, a slight improvement to this would be to use the word "Into" instead of "In":

"Into which basket did you put that exquisite marble figurine?"

Re:How to Write in Plain English by c22 on Tuesday August 25, 2020 @12:46PM (#24273275)
Or within which, with which, yields a pleasant alliteration.
Re:How to Write in Plain English by samatman on Tuesday August 25, 2020 @04:28PM (#24275728)
This is the type of errant sentence up with which I will not put.
Re:How to Write in Plain English by jan6 on Wednesday August 26, 2020 @02:56PM (#24285919)
with that I'd put myself up with, but nice would be if more was written text along the lines of this...
Re:How to Write in Plain English by ghostpepper on Tuesday August 25, 2020 @11:07AM (#24272101)
This is a fascinating discussion.

Could the tension/buffering in that sentence be resolved with something like: "Which basket has got that exquisite marble figurine"? When spoken by a native speaker 'has got' would likely be contracted to "which basket's got"

Sub out 'has got' for 'contains' if you want to be more formal.

Re:How to Write in Plain English by shuntress on Tuesday August 25, 2020 @12:24PM (#24273019)
Shorten even further to "Exquisite marble figure; which basket?" or "which basket? Exquisite marble figure." Depending on which is more likely to short circuit based on context.
Re:How to Write in Plain English by dgellow on Tuesday August 25, 2020 @08:26AM (#24270608)
I have in mind an idea for a movie scenario where someone important is on their death bed and says their last words, and nobody can tell what they actually meant because it may be missing the second part of the verb, resulting in a potentially completely different meaning :)
Re:How to Write in Plain English by ThePadawan on Tuesday August 25, 2020 @09:23AM (#24271051)
"Was ist der Unterschied zwischen einem Raben und einem Schreibtisch"?

As you mention, it gets even screwier given the opportunity to put a "nicht" (not) at the very end of a sentence to lead listeners down a garden path.

Re:How to Write in Plain English by c22 on Tuesday August 25, 2020 @12:50PM (#24273319)
You can do the same thing in English but it's pretty obnoxious.
Re:How to Write in Plain English by ThePadawan on Tuesday August 25, 2020 @03:46PM (#24275266)
Yes, but the grammar doesn't lend itself to it quite as nicely (any more, compared to earlier forms of English, IIRC).

In German, the word order "I believe you not" is the proper way to phrase that sentiment, without being pithy about it.

Re:How to Write in Plain English by StavrosK on Tuesday August 25, 2020 @03:32PM (#24275105)
So, "the President gives his promise about improving unemploymemt rates up"?

This is no different in English: "He told the upstanding, proper young woman off".

Re:How to Write in Plain English by ThePadawan on Wednesday August 26, 2020 @01:40AM (#24279486)
A cursory search [0] suggests that English allows not having such a wide gap between verb parts if it sounds odd, i.e.

"He told off the ... woman."

German doesn't (directly) give you that chance.

[0] https://english.stackexchange.com/questions/77472/is-there-a...

Re:How to Write in Plain English by StavrosK on Wednesday August 26, 2020 @04:06AM (#24280257)
Yes, I'm saying it also allows leaving the gap.