Re:Mozilla lays off 250 employees while it refocuses on comm...
by abalone on Wednesday August 12, 2020 @02:36AM
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> I think this opening was well-written and clearly communicated Mozilla's purpose.
I didn’t think it was well written at all. The sheer number of words is a red flag. There are five focus areas that are all extremely vague. Good writing is clear and concise.
I didn’t think it was well written at all. The sheer number of words is a red flag. There are five focus areas that are all extremely vague. Good writing is clear and concise.