Re:ASK HK: Review my startup: NextCoast, a total web CMS.
by notahacker on Friday January 21, 2011 @08:22AM
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As far as I can see get your social network website running in the time it takes to make coffee (adapted from one of the sub-pages) is your core value proposition, and it should be in big letters on the home page instead of generic phrases like "leap-frog your competition and be a leader, not a follower" and sentences listing technologies.
Much of your text reads like it was written for search engines rather than humans to read, and your screenshots and examples could be a lot more attractive.
Looking at the price points you're looking to charge, paying a professional designer and copywriter would be worth the money here, assuming the end product is fit for purpose.
Much of your text reads like it was written for search engines rather than humans to read, and your screenshots and examples could be a lot more attractive.
Looking at the price points you're looking to charge, paying a professional designer and copywriter would be worth the money here, assuming the end product is fit for purpose.