Re:‘Show, Don’t Tell’ Almost Ruined Me as a Writer
by summerdown2 on Wednesday October 09, 2019 @05:15AM
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To me, the two versions here don't seem like 'showing' vs 'telling,' but interior monologue vs exterior view.
I prefer the first example, and read it as a window into the character's thoughts. It's very much showing to me, but done through character voice and thought.
I prefer the first example, and read it as a window into the character's thoughts. It's very much showing to me, but done through character voice and thought.