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Re:‘Show, Don’t Tell’ Almost Ruined Me as a Writer by ehutch79 on Tuesday October 08, 2019 @09:18AM (#21191926)
I agree with the last bit about how writing advice can be overdone. The slavish adherence to the hero's journey, aka the monomyth, is painful sometimes. When you start recognizing 'the rejection of the call' when the main character has no reason to reject the call to action, it kills any kind of enjoyment.

In the end it's a matter of communicating what you want to the intended audience. 'show don't tell' is a tool to do it. but you're right, not everything is a nail you need to hit with that hammer.

Re:‘Show, Don’t Tell’ Almost Ruined Me as a Writer by smogcutter on Tuesday October 08, 2019 @09:36PM (#21199139)
Yeah, I think there’s a certain amount of tail wagging the dog with use of structures like the hero’s journey. Campbell’s work was observational, not proscriptive. Using it as a template is missing the point.
Re:‘Show, Don’t Tell’ Almost Ruined Me as a Writer by CuriouslyC on Tuesday October 08, 2019 @10:03PM (#21199288)
Certain story structures are more engaging than others. Hero's journey is one of the most engaging well known story structures. Also, many elements of the hero's journey are "optimal" from a psychophysical standpoint.
Re:‘Show, Don’t Tell’ Almost Ruined Me as a Writer by smogcutter on Tuesday October 08, 2019 @10:31PM (#21199434)
I’m not saying the hero’s journey is bad or something, just that it gets misunderstood and falls into flat paint by numbers.

As Campbell set it out, it’s less a singular structure than a catalog of common scenes and archetypes in heroic myths, not all of which might appear in any given story. It’s the overall arc of “hero enters magical world of story -> overcomes trial -> returns with power to grant boons” that’s constant.

In Campbell’s observation, these stories have a cultural function - they’re usually about resolving psychological tensions and navigating liminal spaces. Just using it as an outline to fill in the blanks without understanding why and how those scenes function is going to fall flat every time.