Re:Rate my startup: Simplton
by Travis on Tuesday January 11, 2011 @06:09PM
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On http://simplton.com/philosophy I would make the bullet points the only content on the page. Click them and it expands to show your explanation.
For something that focuses on simplicity, you sure have a lot of words. If I were you, I'd look to cut 75% of your verbiage.
I don't understand what the companies represent on http://simplton.com/pricing. Is that companies that use your service? Am I buying real estate in this imaginary town? I think you're overusing your town metaphor.
For something that focuses on simplicity, you sure have a lot of words. If I were you, I'd look to cut 75% of your verbiage.
I don't understand what the companies represent on http://simplton.com/pricing. Is that companies that use your service? Am I buying real estate in this imaginary town? I think you're overusing your town metaphor.