I think your version is reasonably clear, but it won't survive automatic indentation in any tool.

I use the parantheses the way I do, because editors will auto-indent the code that way. In other words if I press <tab> in Emacs, things won't move around in my example, so I know it's indented properly.

However, within that style, some people do prefer to put the operator at the end of a continuation line, and some prefer it at the beginning.