Re:Helm: Personal Email Server
by isserson on Wednesday October 17, 2018 @11:11AM
(#18239817)
I really appreciate that the "hero" video _asked_ me to click. That already shows you respect me enough not to just auto-play in my face. I think the video suffers from a bit too much dramatization, especially at the end with the triumphant movie trailer music and awkward shots of people looking directly into the camera. I also think some of the copy on the main page could be edited to sound clearer and more natural. For example:
* "Keys only you have access to" -> "Only you have the keys"
* "Room for growth" -> "Room to grow"
* "Gets better over time" -> "Always improving [etc.]"
I mention all the above because I really like what I see here and I'm looking for room in my budget after I post this comment :)
* "Keys only you have access to" -> "Only you have the keys"
* "Room for growth" -> "Room to grow"
* "Gets better over time" -> "Always improving [etc.]"
I mention all the above because I really like what I see here and I'm looking for room in my budget after I post this comment :)
Good luck!