Re:Google Suppresses Memo Revealing Plans to Closely Track S...
by jhayward on Friday September 21, 2018 @05:16PM
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Just some editorial advice: put the lede in the first paragraph. The disclaimer should be lightened up, unless that's what you want people to engage with.
Edit: I wrote this because I was sad that people were arguing with the disclaimer, not the author's more substantive point. I don't mean to be patronizing or condescending in any way.
Edit: I wrote this because I was sad that people were arguing with the disclaimer, not the author's more substantive point. I don't mean to be patronizing or condescending in any way.