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Re:Read first pages of novels, and reveal the author and tit... by alleyshack on Tuesday May 29, 2018 @01:16PM (#17181089)
In pretty much any writing medium (novels, screenplays, short stories, etc), standard advice involves hooking the reader within the first paragraph or so. This is partly why "in medias res" tends to be such a popular opening technique - it drops the reader straight into the action, which is theoretically more interesting than "She woke up, got dressed, and went downstairs for her daily breakfast of toast and juice...". However, starting in medias res has itself become something of a cliche, to the point where you have to really know what you're doing to be able to use it effectively.

What I think a lot of novice writers, and people giving advice to novice writers, often miss is that "hooking" your reader doesn't mean immediately assualting them with action. All it means is raising a question the reader wants to know the answer to.

For example, "The Wizard Hunters" opens with the line "It was nine o'clock at night and Tremaine was trying to find a way to kill herself that would bring in a verdict of natural causes in court, when someone banged on the door." Not much action - Tremaine is sitting in a dusty library reading books - but that line raises two immediate questions: 1, why is Tremaine trying to kill herself in a way that would be ruled "natural causes", and 2, who's banging on the door at 9pm?

Similarly, "Black Sun Rising", the first book of the Coldfire Trilogy, opens with the line "She wondered why she was afraid to go home." Again, the line raises multiple questions, inviting the reader to keep reading to learn the answers.

Re:Read first pages of novels, and reveal the author and tit... by Swizec on Tuesday May 29, 2018 @01:27PM (#17181187)
My forever favorite opening line to a novel remains “We were somewhere around Barstow, on the edge of the desert, when the drugs began to take hold”

How can you not want to keep reading after that? While at the same time it’s still at the beginning, not assaulting you with action, etc

Re:Read first pages of novels, and reveal the author and tit... by marnett on Tuesday May 29, 2018 @01:54PM (#17181449)
God bless Hunter.
Re:Read first pages of novels, and reveal the author and tit... by isolli on Tuesday May 29, 2018 @02:17PM (#17181671)
An interesting example, one of the best-known book openings in French literature ("Aujourd'hui, maman est morte."), and the difficulties translating the sentence in English: https://www.newyorker.com/books/page-turner/lost-in-translat...
Re:Read first pages of novels, and reveal the author and tit... by ahartmetz on Tuesday May 29, 2018 @03:17PM (#17182147)
Interesting article, and I believe I have a better translation: "Today, my mom died." It sounds better than just "mom" and seems to express the right level of closeness.

OTOH I think it's often appropriate to keep "mamma" in Italian movies and texts because it carries a huge amount of connotations, which "maman" doesn't.

Re:Read first pages of novels, and reveal the author and tit... by jprissi on Wednesday May 30, 2018 @09:13AM (#17187375)
> Interesting article, and I believe I have a better translation: "Today, my mom died."

Well it's not an accurate translation, 'my' create a distance between the narrator and the mother that you don't have in the original sentence.

You traduction is much more objective than what the author wrote.

Re:Read first pages of novels, and reveal the author and tit... by yesenadam on Tuesday May 29, 2018 @09:52PM (#17184395)
"Mom" is US English only I think.
Re:Read first pages of novels, and reveal the author and tit... by dingaling on Tuesday May 29, 2018 @05:10PM (#17182934)
But then you have to translate for the majority of English-speaking countries that don't use 'mom'...
Re:Read first pages of novels, and reveal the author and tit... by labster on Wednesday May 30, 2018 @12:05AM (#17184982)
"Mum"'s the word.
Re:Read first pages of novels, and reveal the author and tit... by taneq on Tuesday May 29, 2018 @07:31PM (#17183657)
Or if you use "mother" it changes the tone to be more preppy.
Re:Read first pages of novels, and reveal the author and tit... by wrycoder on Tuesday May 29, 2018 @09:32PM (#17184301)
“Woke up, fell out of bed Dragged a comb across my head Found my way downstairs and drank a cup And looking up I noticed I was late Found my coat and grabbed my hat Made the bus in seconds flat Found my way upstairs and had a smoke Somebody spoke and I went into a dream”
Re:Read first pages of novels, and reveal the author and tit... by komali2 on Tuesday May 29, 2018 @01:33PM (#17181247)
A great example of "in media res" mildly weirdly implemented is the beginning of the second "Sin City" movie, wherein Marv wakes up next to a crashed cop car and some other vehicle, asking "how did I get here?" It's a weird implementation because it immediately goes into a flashback, but I wouldn't say it's a "poor" implementation because the effect is the viewer is introduced to Marv's memory issues.
Re:Read first pages of novels, and reveal the author and tit... by pjc50 on Tuesday May 29, 2018 @03:43PM (#17182341)
"It was the day my grandmother exploded."

- opening sentence of Iain Banks' The Crow Road

Re:Read first pages of novels, and reveal the author and tit... by glandium on Tuesday May 29, 2018 @06:55PM (#17183482)
> "She woke up, got dressed, and went downstairs for her daily breakfast of toast and juice..."

It's been a long time since last time I read it, but isn't this essentially the opening of the Hitchhiker's guide to the galaxy?

Re:Read first pages of novels, and reveal the author and tit... by majormajor on Tuesday May 29, 2018 @07:18PM (#17183599)
I think you get the opening with the bit about the world being destroyed and losing the great idea for peace and whatnot, first.

edit: yep, there's a prologue which gives you the broader scope https://www.amazon.com/Hitchhikers-Guide-Galaxy-Douglas-Adam...