There was a big stink* a few years ago about the big airlines using new pilots on regional routes and paying them so little that many were on food stamps. I don't want to put my life in the hands of someone who is worried about where their kids' next meal will come from. What is the starting salary for your pilots?
* https://www.wimp.com/michael-moore-pilots-on-food-stamps/
https://www.reddit.com/r/flying/comments/1wxkki/pilots_on_fo...
https://blogs.wsj.com/corporate-intelligence/2014/02/12/flyi...
https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/23265283-pilots-on-food-...
Though I think you're more at risk on your drive to the airport from the truck or bus driver in the next lane that earns less money than a pilot.
I am also agreeing with the other comments on don't bash your competition that much. If you have a good offer - and you do - you don't have to do that. You just need to highlight your core benefits/conditions - your two hubs and the private terminal time saver.
"I don't want to put my life in the hands of someone who is worried about where their kids' next meal will come from."
I will agree that the website talks too much trash about other services. Maybe list all the customary fees people expect that you don't have. That would be valuable information and doesn't require trash talking anyone. Something like:
No fee to print tickets.
No cancellation fee.
No bag check fee.
No other hidden fees.
Just one low price stated up front so you know exactly what to expect.
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I will suggest that you might try apologizing less and thanking people more. It is more of a position of strength. For example, instead of apologizing that the site does not work on iPad, you could say something like "That's good info. We will get right on it. Thanks for letting us know."
Your replies here are fairly solid. I am not suggesting they are bad. I am only hoping to help you further up your game.
Best of luck.
Companies have shown a lot of interest in this. Most beneficial aspect is booking late with paying a high fare.
Is it use it or lose it type flights?
I didn't even notice the private terminal stuff (didn't get that far). I thought it was some type of group buying thing on big carriers like Delta, etc.
Private terminal is a huge win. I know some friends who want to live in LA but work remotely in SF. 1-2 flights a month in a private terminal for this pricing seems like a steal especially when you can shave off terminal/travel time at big airports.
This could be awesome for companies and employees. I could see a company having a remote employee in LA but wanting have a face to face meeting in the next 24 hours. Tickets would be super expensive but if you had a plan like this you could just fly them in fast. And if you needed more flights you could always book commercial.