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Re:Smooth Talk by qznc on Thursday November 02, 2017 @01:15PM (#15612275)
I do check my texts for passive voice and turn a lot into active voice. However, sometimes I do prefer passive.

An example from the abstract of my (unpublished) dissertation: Exploiting special hardware is a well-known technique to lower energy consumption, which is another important aspect that must be balanced with raw performance.

I don't want to use active voice, because at this point nobody cares who does the balancing. Using you (...that you must balance...) seems not suitable in an abstract.

Re:Smooth Talk by mhb on Thursday November 02, 2017 @01:37PM (#15612432)
The passive voice issue is secondary to the other issues of the sentence:

1) Ambiguous antecedent - to what does "which" refer - special hardware? Lower energy consumption?

2) Exploiting is not a noun. "The exploitation of special hardware..."

Perhaps: A well-known technique to lower energy consumption is the exploitation of special hardware. ...

Re:Smooth Talk by hDeraj on Thursday November 02, 2017 @02:29PM (#15612970)
Exploiting can be a noun: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gerund