No I read the whole thing. He has done far more than many in his position, and you are downplaying that. This type of self-gratifying, armchair criticism is precisely the thing that nobody cares to hear.
I agree he's done a lot. As an entrepreneur I think he's amazing.
As a world savior his projects aren't up to par due to unsound philosophical axioms. That's what I'm criticizing.
And I think his rampant idolization right now is unhealthy
"Elon Musk is an amazing entrepreneur but as a World Savior he is probably the World’s most OverRated."