Re:Giving you more characters
by flycaliguy on Tuesday September 26, 2017 @06:36PM
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Don't ever let a poet see this comment.
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Re:Giving you more characters
by JumpCrisscross on Tuesday September 26, 2017 @07:28PM
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> Don't ever let a poet see this comment
Why?
My guess is that sixty-seven has four syllables, twenty-five has three.
In the first verse, there doesn't seem to be any pattern to the lengths (in syllables) of the lines; 10, 7, 8, 8, 12, 8. I'm not sure the meter would really be damaged that much by reducing the last line by one syllable.
Sixty-seven has a completely different feeling than twenty-five.
It's likely less about meter than flow.
Re:Giving you more characters
by matthewowen on Tuesday September 26, 2017 @08:52PM
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they don't sound the same.