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Re:Tackling Technical Writing by criddell on Thursday August 24, 2017 @02:17PM (#15092584)
> The thing performing the verb may not be relevant or may be actively distracting to mention.

That's exactly what I was thinking when I mentioned my Chem 101 lab reports.

I tend to write in a passive voice and if I read my words out loud rather than silently, it's obvious to me. It's almost sounds like I'm using cop talk (the subject was observed exiting the vehicle).

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