Thanks a lot for your feedback, Just build it roughly in an hour to show the keypoints.
Now I think I will invest time on creating a better landing page.
And the reason also for why one should use it.
Now I think I will invest time on creating a better landing page.
And the reason also for why one should use it.
The idea is sound - and you obviously have the skills needed to provide it. Just put more emphasis on how it will look and work, show off everything you can do on the landing page.