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Great point. Secondary market transactions have to be included in the 409(a) valuation analysis and this caused a lot of problems for companies like Facebook who had active secondary markets (with rising prices) even as they tried to keep option strike prices low to recruit new employees. I am not an expert but I think the short answer is that if you buy $1 worth of stock then it can be ignored as a non-material transaction but if you buy $1 million then it has to be scrutinized along with all similar transactions which would be collectively factored into the formula for ''fair market value''.
Another minor point - when calculating return in this case, you have to adjust for the fact that this guy ''invested'' $18k but wasn't able to count that money towards his basis in the stock or realize long-term capital gains treatment the way a typical angel investor would have. This means he will likely pay an extra 20% in Federal taxes, which lowers his LTCG-adjusted psuedo-angel-investment return a bit further.