“It turns out”

Re:“It turns out” by Angostura on Wednesday March 03, 2010 @07:57AM (#1163962)

I think Safire would probably have suggested that you used "died" rather than "passed on". No?

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Re:“It turns out” by rtperson on Wednesday March 03, 2010 @01:38PM (#1164756)

He would also have suggested a comma after "sadly," so that it's obvious that it's the writer's comment, rather than a modifier on the way Safire died.

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