The company example is awesome! Thanks for bringing it up. It shows the gist of what's wrong with Chinese Room Argument, but it doesn't sound so abstract. That we should switch to considering the man+book system may not be obvious to someone, but I think anyone living in our civilization will implicitly understand that e.g. no single person in Boeing has enough knowledge to build a 787, and yet the company as a whole knows everything they need to do it.
It tries to intentionally confuse the reader in an effort to make up for a very weak argument.
A clearer example would be asking something like - does a company (the system) now how to make product X, when no individual in that company knows how to make product X (each individual knows only a small part of the production process)? Of course, a clearer example isn't used because it wouldn't elicit the desired response.