Show HN: Nixar – New design of Linux command line

Re:Show HN: Nixar – New design of Linux command line by mediumdeviation on Monday November 16, 2015 @04:06AM (#10573387)

Sorry to be pedantic but I presume you're not a native English speaker? 'Joyable' is not an English word, but rather the name of a startup company[1]. Perhaps you're looking for 'joyful'. 'Checkout' when spelt as one word refers to the place in a supermarket where you pay for the things in your basket. When you ask people to look at something, it's usually spelt as two words (as in 'check this out').

[1]: https://joyable.com/

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Re:Show HN: Nixar – New design of Linux command line by luxpir on Monday November 16, 2015 @08:18AM (#10574216)

It was probably 'enjoyable'. That was one fault that didn't stop me reading on. While we're at it though, 'Checkout' used incorrectly did stop me, however, because in the software context 'checkout' could refer to more than just supermarkets. I'd fix that one. Especially on a call to action. I'd also fix 'fine file'.

Scoring grammar points could be seen as nitpicking, but I think in a Show HN situation, where fair criticism is welcome, it's helping to improve presentation and conversion rates. If some kind of 'foreign bias' kicks in for some visitors you might lose the conversion completely. Copy counts. In any language.

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Re:Show HN: Nixar – New design of Linux command line by Lorkki on Monday November 16, 2015 @04:11PM (#10577184)

>'Joyable' is not an English word

I honestly just assumed it was some new piece of web development jargon (like "RESTful") that I had somehow missed, and kept reading assuming it would somehow explain itself.

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