Re:Carbon nanotubes found in children’s lungs
by JoeAltmaier on Wednesday October 21, 2015 @02:04PM
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My wife (tech writer) calls this the 'mystery novel' form of essay. She says Engineers are particularly guilty of writing that way. She was right, in my case anyway. For a while after I married her I would go through all my writing and move the last sentence in each paragraph to first. Because I did it all the time.
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Re:Carbon nanotubes found in children’s lungs
by hinkley on Thursday October 22, 2015 @12:23PM
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This sounds similar to 'burying the punchline' which we are also prone to do.
If you have a solution to the problem you are describing, please notify us in the first paragraph so we don't think you're just complaining.