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Re:Mail Pilot 2 for Mac by dctoedt on Thursday August 27, 2015 @09:12PM (#10133149)

I'll make you a deal, Thomas: If you'll lobby equally vigorously for Jane's use of comma splices [1] [2] as acceptable practice, I'll reconsider the singular "they."

[1] E.g., the second comma in "It is a truth universally acknowledged, that a single man in possession of a good fortune, must be in want of a wife." (Chapter 1, first sentence.) Or the third [EDIT: fourth] comma in "Not all that Mrs. Bennet, however, with the assistance of her five daughters, could ask on the subject, was sufficient to draw from her husband any satisfactory description of Mr. Bingley." (Chapter 3, first sentence.) [3]

[2] https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Comma_splice

[3] https://www.gutenberg.org/files/1342/1342-h/1342-h.htm#link2...

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Re:Mail Pilot 2 for Mac by tedunangst on Thursday August 27, 2015 @11:13PM (#10133555)

Those aren't comma splices because there aren't two independent clauses.

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Re:Mail Pilot 2 for Mac by dctoedt on Friday August 28, 2015 @10:20AM (#10135540)

True -- is there a better term for the comma usage illustrated in the two Jane Austen quotes?

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Re:Mail Pilot 2 for Mac by tedunangst on Friday August 28, 2015 @12:24PM (#10136330)

Superfluous, stylistic commas. Or superfluous stylistic commas if you prefer. Commas are inserted seemingly at random by some authors to control the pacing of a sentence. It's not necessarily wrong. btw, "confessions of a comma queen" in the new yorker may be an interesting read.

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